RedactedProfile's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[poor girl]

I.. have no idea.. whats going on... Looks a little like Adventure Time, but... wut?

mickthepenguinNG responds:

duh because it is adventure time plus this is a short animation i know i am suck but i am good at drawing but her friend sad because her friend family die last year :c

[A Very Slender Christmas]

Totally made my day haha the song at the end, is that already somewhere? Or can that go on the audio portal? :)

[Sprite A Day Revenge: 9]

Pretty awesome day, if I do say so myself ;)

Horsenwelles responds:

you would you bias billy

[: Plank & Owl :]

fully agree. 100%.

man its good to see Foamy again lol

[The World Ending]

That was awesome buddy, well animated, well executed :)

[bum]

Wasnt bad, thought the cursing was a little over the top, and not in a funny way, but otherwise it was ok

rrool responds:

thanks for the review

[Game Grumps: Arin's Rage]

Hahah not bad, liked it alot actually :)

[Nobody vs Axel]

It's not a bad start, but I think what needs to be worked on is "distinction".
It mostly just looks like they're running into eachother over and over again, none of the "moves" really look like much or that they do anything different to the receiver than anything else.

For primarily melee characters, like the Nobody character, he looks like a Mage or something to me because of the pointy hat, have him dish out stuff that looks like magic, much like his final blow does. Do more of that, less of melee.
And of course, Axel, have him attack slower with that giant axe. Make him feel more danerous by carrying a lot of weight.

Ultimately, jsut slow it down, be more tactful and thoughtful with each attack, plan out the choreography first if you have to. Make the fight feel less like two hand puppets fighting, and more like characters in a work of fiction duking it out :)

[Applejack Kirby Animation]

I've been watching this for like 10 minutes until it dawned on me that it's just looping lol I was waiting for something to happen.

The drawings are crisp, clear, and faithful to the base Kirby character, theres nothing wrong here, but ultimately, the main problem is that: there's nothing happening. Your Applejack here barely moves at all, and the apple doesnt do anything besides.. well.. exist.

Random-Blackfox responds:

Well, it just was a test of the sprites I made of Kirby using a sigle ability of Applejack from My Little Pony, nothing special.

[Glurmp]

Pretty short, and wasn't particularily interesting.
That said, the animation was alright, hammer looked and moved good, like, there's nothing wrong here, just felt mostly pointless is all. Just when I thought some punchline was about to happen, it zapped back to the play button, left my mouth feeling kind of dry haha

EpilepticEmus responds:

yah like the description said im just trying to get used to working with sound effects but thanks for the review!