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That ending was fantastic, very cool. I liked the weight added to every impact, and the parallax was very well done.

Did you have a script going on for the shakycam aspect or did you animate every pixel of camera movement?

JJSwift responds:

Thanks man! Glad you liked it. :D And there was no script, nor pixel... camera... thing.(Doesn't understand that part XD) I mostly tweened the camera, and for the camera shakes, for impact I just made the tweens close to each other or made them all keyframes and stuff.

I love you yotam.. never change

Holy shit

Color me pleasantly surprised, I REALLY loved every second of this :D ROCK ON MAN!

Art5yman responds:

thank you man!

I like the fact your using frame by frame animation here, please keep that up

Aside from art cleanup and maybe adding a few more inbetweens to smooth things out, the only thing that really nagged at me was the fade transitions, its a bit too slow and kills the pacing if you ask me. For something that looks like its trying to be a Hanna Barbara whacky comedy, fade transitions should only be used when transitioning the viewer either to a fake commercial break or signifying a significant portion of time being passed. If my memory serves, everything else in a HB cartoon was jump cuts

Keep it up man! Cheers :)

ZacharyNoah responds:

Update: I corrected the fade transitions by slowing down the still shots and looping some shots. Also, I made the bomb explosion more effective by replacing the not-so-effective smoke build-up with flashing colors. Lastly, at the end of the cartoon, I replaced the generic fade-to-black effect with a more cartoony iris-out effect, accompanied by the appropriate sound effect.

Thanks for the review and noticing the errors that I made. This cartoon was made way before I even got a computer with a touch screen. It was my attempt to mimic the scratchy and sketchy animation style of the cartoons made in the 1960's and 1970's. Also, my paper amount is extremely limited. Most importantly, the fade transitions that I did was my attempt to mimic the Road Runner cartoons. Maybe for my next cartoon, I'll try and push my visual style a bit further. Thank you for enjoying!

Got a real cyanide & happiness mixed with psychicpebbles vibe going on here with the art direction lol

I liked the joke, but my only direct criticism here is tat maybe it could have been made more obvious (perhaps during the establishing panorama) who the popular kid was in the first place, rather than some random dude on the left, you know?

The animation was super solid, loved it!

Happy Birthday man! I love watching these and going back to watch the older ones. It's really fun watching the character of Yotam grow up :)

The massive problem here, is that 80% of this video is out of sync

had everything been in sync and not marred by video latency (probably the fault of the codec during encoding) this would have probably been very excellent

Cheers Gary!

God i just LOVE watching these. Top notch stuff, top notch

Awe, I didn't get a shout out? ;) Congrats on making it all the way man, couldnt have been easy, especially with that ancient copy of Flash of yours ;)

Cheers!

Horsenwelles responds:

aw... i thought i put you in there man... i'll put you in the flash's main description ;)

I like cartoons. I think there are some around here..

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